rate_review Reviews

I really liked that chapter, actually. I like your portrayal of her parents, and I like Lucius' reaction.

Very nice dinner party. Great chapter, love Crookshanks the most.

Wonderful chapter can

Hermione's dad is a sweetie. I liked him and Lucius bonding over botany, and his way of sussing out Mr Malfoy's feelings. Very subtle.

Is it just me that really can't imagine Lucius behind the wheel of a car, by the way? Cracking the whip on a racing gig - yes - behind the wheel - no. Curious. The man simply doesn't do mundane, does he?

Lucius is so clueless its both adorable and frustrating at the same time. I enjoyed this chapter. Please continue soon.

This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more to find out if Lucius truly loves Hermione. I think he does but he just can't express it yet. Please update again soon.

That was an awesome chpater. I thought it was really sweet. Please add more soon.

yes... Crooks as a feline Lucius!!!! thats purrfect!!!

beautiful. positively beautiful. its nice to
know that Hermione's parents aren't going to
blast Lucius but are still quite capable of
keeping him on his toes. and, if i know Lucius,
that one little thought planted by her father
is going to keep nagging at him until he answers
the question for himself.

i can't wait for the moment when he does.

again, looking forward to more.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf