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This was a great chapter. I am glad that Lucius confronted Scrimgeour about his imprisonment. I can't wait till they find out exactly who framed both him and Hermione. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

oh wow. lots of juicy bits to be had in that
chapter if one looks for them. i very much
enjoyed it, though i can honestly say i don't
recall being that emotionally charged with my
son. granted that was almost sixteen years ago.
still....

maybe it was because the sperm donor was never
around for me to deal with.

regardless, i'm looking forward to more.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

Who could our reclusive plotters be? Pissed off deatheaters out for revenge? Maybe a couple of Weasleys? Distant family out for Lucius's fortune? I cant wait to find out who!

Pregnancy and absurd mood swings go hand in hand....and they get worse with each pregnancy, at least mine did. It wouldnt seem right if she weren't crying, bitching or doing both at the same time. In my head, Lucius probably avoided Narcissa during her pregnancy....she probably laid up in bed as though she were an invalid.


My friend Jo calls it pot roast, she lives in Dover....but her hubby is an American Soldier so I suppose she could have picked it up in the US.

I cant wait for more!!!!!!!

By goddess they are both stubborn. I know Hermione was hurt but Lucius in his own way is trying. At least she could do is give him some credit. Any way great chapter. Please add more soon.

(Regarding Chapter Seven)

I

(Regarding Chapter Eight)

exquisite, tawny skin Lucius Malfoy has an all-over tan? Surely he

hermione drives me crazy in this story as much as she dose in the books, so i guess you have he down pact on the attitude. i think you should let her relax some soon she is driving me crazy with her moods. i love this story and i can't wait to see how you bring it all together. they both have to learn compromise and forgiveness. keep up the good work and update soon please.

Well it sounds like Lucius can breathe easier knowing that Hermione's parents are not going to kill him and bury him on the property. The dinner went very well, I really like how you wrote Hermione's dad. In canon we don't know very much about her parents, it's always interesting to read other authors interpration on what her parents should be like. I really like your, they care for their daughter deeply, but they respect her decision and support her through it. I can't wait for more!

(Regarding Chapter Four)

No, the Ministry is overrun by servile, brown-nosing snivelers MEOW! Lucius, put your claws away! Lol. That sentence is showing that when he

(Regarding Chapter Five)

Lucius jumped up in alarm when he saw what looked like Hermione keeling over in a dead faint or worse., as I said previously, his actions are far beyond a concerned person