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person DB1
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@27. awesome chapter, update soon

*DB*
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lucius sometimes just does not get subtittly or anger scrasm, which ever you want to call it that hermione was displaing. well dear lucius is doing something to his manson, i wonder what it is and i really wonder if it is for hermione or influnced by her. well as always i will soon find out. well i wonder who your villains are because i have no clue and i rather like that. well on with the show! :)
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! can't wait until you have hermione move in to lucius' house and the baby comes along...
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all these
person Utopia
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Regarding Chapter Nine)

schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione's hormones are giving her a field day, aren't they? This was a good chapter. I look forward to more.
person Pumkin
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well you warned me. thanks for another chapter even tough it rankled me at the end.lol. wonderful job as always, keep it up. update soon please.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that chapter. And Hermione's pregnancy reactions are really funny.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, tetchy, Hermione! It's the hormones Lucius should be keeping an eye on, not the diet.

Glad to see he knows the way to her heart though - reading 'Hogwarts: A History'! Ha ha.

It's good that Scrimgeour realises something is rotten in the Ministry - now we just need to know WHO these rotten apples ARE!

Another intriguing chapter; elements unravelling at a delightfully measured pace. Cheers!