rate_review Reviews

thank you so much for the update. i needed to
get lost in something after the night i had
last night. don't ask, it isn't worth going in
to.

suffice it to say that i'm scattered and will
likely have to read the chapter again. though i
did like how Lucius laid his claim to Hermione
and just how careful he's being with her. i can't
wait to see her face when she moves into the Manor
(yes, i'm sure she's going to be so impressed).
i also can't wait for the baby to come and to see
what happens to those two plotters when that devious
man gets his hands on them.

please tell me he gets to punish them.

eagerly awaiting more.

~blessings~
ldf

You're a woman (I assume) after my own heart - preferring writing feedback over typical Valentine's/anniversary fare.

Anyway, as usual, I like it. I look forward to seeing how Lucius adapts to having to accommodate a human servant. He took his house elves for granted, and he can't do that with Otto. I also really like how Hermione is making herself indisposable to Lucius not only in bed but in life in general.

Perfect!!!
Smart kid, Draco!!
Smart Hermione! And a great watlz!! * sigh* Thanks

I enjoy watching Lucius's mind work at trying to overcome Hermione's will and Hermione's mind working to overcome Lucius's schemes. I also liked that Draco could see what Lucius is actively trying to ignore. I enjoyed this chapter. I am looking forward to the next.

Chapter 24:
"So far they meshed about as well as Snape and bow ties." *snicker* Now I have this all too comical image of Snape stuck in my head. I expect that his facial expression would ressemble that of a soaked cat.
"Lucius beamed at her beatifically as though she had invented motherhood just for him." Awww. So sweet!

And the nap on the couch in chapter 25 is very cute as well.

Still not quite caught up but I've put off my schoolwork long enough now. (In fact a little too long but we won't mention that...) I'm enjoying this story more than quite a bit! I think that this one is my favorite of yours.

I don't know why Draco insists on bringing Pansy either. I don't find her enough of a challenge for him. Ah, well. I don't like Lucius' peers. I don't think I'm meant to. But I really did like Draco's take on the whole thing. He knows Hermione, and figures his father is going to fall hard. I liked that.

well the war is on. i cant believe hermione actually believed that lucius would tell those beast the truth yet, that is until her could show her. well he better be thinking up something big to help sooth that sore. well i am truly looking forward to what lucius has planned and it better be good. yes i really like draco and i totally love him true to form and yet perfect for his role and he knows that hermione will win. :) you could not ask for better. update soon!

This was simply lovely LaBib. As always, I think you write divine.

I loved how you brought old Shultz back, I mean Otto. lol

I also love all the descriptions, from Hermione

Wow LaBib! I just noticed that you added me to your recommended story site! I am so incredibly flattered! You just don

I swear I am not ignoring your story. I just don't have the time I use to anymore. Which is I guess a good things, that means that I am not sitting at the computer for hours at a time. Those villians have me very worried. To take Hermione and Lucius out at a public oureblood party. They are very daring! I think I might have one of them figured out but I'm not sure just yet. Can't wait for your next chapter :)