rate_review Reviews

Ok, before I forget: "Don't eat the paint!" I almost rolled off my bed with laughter. I'm still cracking up as I write this. My housemate probably thinks I'm crazy.

I've been reading lots of your stories, but the few times I tried to review, the site denied me. I know how much you love your reviews, so blame AFF :)

I think my favorite story has to be Taming, although I'm about 3/4 of the way through Beyond the Veil and loving it, as I totally think I was born in the wrong century and would be having a ball if I got sent back in time. There wouldn't be a problem with Tahitian underwear, because those babies would have been transfigured into bloomers and a corset really quickly!

The pictures you include...lordy. The one from rainboweye.de on your LJ is pretty much a fixture on my computer screen :)

(Chapter 20)

I love this story so far! Unfortunately before completing it i have to comment on one point which made me laugh out loud.

'BRITS DON'T EAT PANCAKES'

I'm afraid we brits do eat pancakes - love them in fact. We even have a pancake day - Shrove Tuesday (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shrove_Tuesday). We may not eat them as much as those in other countries (America etc) but we love them still!

maybe it's the grand marnier influencing my fingers at the moment but I thought that it was time i reviewed your wonderful story. I have loved every minute of it and can't wait to read the next chapter. your grasp on the characters is phenomenal and you have made this singler woman quite happy. I can't wait to keep reading and I applaud your talent. If I had that kind of knack for wriitng my fanfics would surely blossom in the way that your have.

"Thank you." *Crumplette happily takes the offered tumbler of firewhiskey and takes a long sip of the amber liquid.* "I really needed that after reading the chapter."

But it's all good. I like the way the story is going, even though Lucius is suffering right now (oh no, how terrible!!! But oh so necessary). I understand that he has to come to his own terms with things in his own sweet time. And that's not easy given his personality.
You are doing an outstanding job at writing him! My sincere compliments. If he just gave in now, it wouldn't come across as believable. And it would also be boring. So I gladly follow you on your detour.

This is such a funny story. Very lively, and very believable. Lucius is nicely in character. And I just love the antics of both inmates when they're dancing around each other. Awesome. And you realistically and in much detail let us partake in their daily lives ..... including .... ahem.... bodily routines. :D

Lucius is currently doing calisthenics and Hermione fell asleep. Priceless. ;)

"Please let me know in excruciating detail how it met your expectations"... hehe: awesome description of the wedding night. I love the shower escapades. :) and everything else :) You definitely have more than surpassed my "expectations" for this chapter. hehe :D And your writing style is very classy and elegant. Your story is highly enjoyable.

And I am very glad that Hermione's friends really are worried about her, and are making efforts to look for her. I know if one of my friends would just mysteriously disappear, I'd go crazy with worry.

i love the story, and was on the second reading of it when i really noticed "warden la fey." i truly hope that i was not the only one to chuckle over this, or were you laughing to yourself about the play on one of morgana's names?

It is no surprise that Lucius had a plan in mind...or a balcony for that matter. I am anxious to see what happens next.

I love the banter between Lucius & Hermione. The stripes make him look fat?! Lol

What a fun, fantastic story! I loved it! I had some good laughs and my eyes welled up a few times but it was wonderful all the same. Great work!