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schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good , i would like more of lucious and hermione stories
one of the very best stories i ever read.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They had the baby! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Crawls out from beneath Snape across the cellar floor - yay for cushioning charms*

No, Lucius, we certainly would NOT buy that story about the ivory penis being purely ornamental, ha ha ha. Super-hot smuttiness there, even at Hermione's advanced state of pregnancy. Isn't she the creative one? (Actually, no, that'd be you.) Whoa, is about all I can say (and look, I spelled it right too).

I prefer Lucien to Henry, but Lucien Henri is a nice compromise. Are they going to pronounce it in OTT French accents? I quite like the idea of Snape with a foxy French Potions mistress. I wish them both well (though I don't suppose she realises he's in the cellar with me right now).

And Congratulations to the new parents. A lovely intimate birth scene; Lucius is a sweetie really. Awww.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Chapter. Great job! Please add more
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I love the name they chose for their son. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why didn't you tell us we needed some chocolate
or popcorn or something for that lovely bit of
kinkiness? damn it, where's my man?

oh wait. i don't have one.

oh well. it was another excellent chapter. i do
so love to see a deviant side to both of them,
though its gratifying to know that my thoughts
about Lucius were dead on. domineering, controlling
and filled with a kinky side that simply can't be
contained or held back.

and a boy. Lucius must be so proud. will Draco be
pleased to have a sibling? will he not care? here's
hoping that he will accept his brother with grace
and style.
hopefully, Lucius will be able to go through with
his plans to clear the air. i think they both need
to take care of those problems that do nothing but
hold them back from having a truly amazing
relationship.

oh yeah... and get rid of the trouble makers. that'll
be a big help.

thanks for sharing and i look forward to more.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person Damiana
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 33

Woo! A new chapter is up! *does a little dance*

Wow...so I love the kinky lemon. It was very cute to see Lucius blushing about his own toy. He is always so confident about matters of the bedroom...I don't think that his squirming took anything away. It merely revealed how little he wants to show of his own vulnerabilities and emotions. Hermione now has more solid ground upon which to stand. Of course, the fact that at this point he trusts her to tie him up without prior knowledge of her intentions speaks volumes about the evolution of their relationship. Hehehe. Emotional development through kink.

I also quite enjoyed the birthing scene. I don't see it as entirely incongruous to pair the two. I don't know what the doctors say elsewhere but I've heard many times of using sexual relations as a means of inducing a birth. I expect that the kinky stuff might have to be toned down but intercourse is never prohibited (unless the pregnancy required complete bed rest...then I can imagine that it might not be so advisable) and is even encouraged around the due date!

Good chapter. :)

person pittwitch
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely more and more Slytherin tendencies in our dear Hermione.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
From argument over names to kinky sex, and then birthing, you put a lot into this chapter. It was a fun roller coaster ride, nice and smooth. I was wondering though, why doesn't Lucius suggest his new son's name as something similar to Draco's name? Then again he is a vain peacock, so having a son named similarly to his own makes him happy I suppose.