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schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please add more soon!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I did forget that I read in the last chapter about Lucius wanting to preserve his Pureblood line in his halfblood son through a name similar to his own.

I am amusing myself with an image of Lucius really as a blond fairy godmother, and it's coming out pretty interesting in my mind. But alas, I have no art skills to put the image on paper.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I like how Severus told Hermione things that Lucius didn't tell her. I am glad that Lucius wants to spend time with his son and I hope that Hermione can come to love Lucius more now. Please update again soon. I look forward to reading more.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i do so love how you've portrayed Lucius as being
concerned about his family. i'd always thought that
he was so much more than the person we were shown
in the movies and books. since it was all from Harry's
perspective, we only saw what he saw. i've always
thought that he was much more loving toward his
family then we were allowed to see.

which is why i wrote my own fic to that end.

so i love to see that there are others who believe
him capable of being a loving husband, a good
father and still can be a huge asshole in the
process. brava, my dear. i can't wait for the
next chapter and i can't wait to find out how
the two of them reconcile themselves.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

ps: check your mail box for a private email from
me.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting, and hot. And to completely change tone, it must be nice to have enought money to have your own birthing room.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha -- Danger Danger Will Robinson +++++++++++++ kinky smut on the way!!! Like I could even think of skipping that. I mean please! It
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since near the beginning, but I only recently got an account and started writing. hence the late review. Unfortunately school (which seems to think it's more important than fanfic for some reason) got in the way, and while I would drop everything to read earlier chapters, the effect wasn't quite the same in the later chapters. When I have more time I might read them again, maybe I just didn't give them a decent chance, you are a brilliant writer, and most fics that I like often turn out to be written by you.
person DB1
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@33 aww sweet chapter, update soon

*DB*
person Citten
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well sweety i believe you that hermione made you do it and i dont blame you we women-you just never know! ;) i love severus but i really dont care that you dont write about his love intrest. i love that lucius was present and i love the reaction best of all for babies are truely maricals in the making. well do up date soon and let us see what happens to our little family. :)