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Wow great job girl! Please add more!

... Ok you catch me I'm a Lurker, I do love your story I was so worried for poor Lucius, I wonder if Hermione Knows that she's pregnat ...because Im pretty sure she is ... and if she dosen't know ginny knows of that Im sure. soo keep the writting I love this story, and I think is wonderfull that you are working on it I hate when a Story is unfinished I can't help to think that the characters are frozen waiting for the authors to come back!!

I'm going to start to sound like a broken record, but I just now got caught up from last time. Everytime I think things are slowing down they pick right back up! I guess it's a good thing. I did however have to skim the four chapters I was behind them. I think I will have to reread this story after you complete because I think I am missing some of the details. So far I love the emotional and mental peroblems that Hermione and Lucius are going through. I wish I had more witty things to say but right now I am running on empty. Apparently not only is my writting block effecting my stories but also my reviewing :)

chapter 34

You know...it's funny that Lucius never struck me as the anxiety attack type...but now that you've protrayed him in his sleepless nights, I expect that such a tightly wound man might be prone to such things. Where does all that stress go?!

The plot thickens! When will each accept that the other is in love! Dammit! I'll be throwing popcorn at my screen soon...Yay!

Lucius is becoming more and more sweet as the story goes on, yet he somehow manages to retain that inherent danger he has and evoke a great amount of wariness from those around him. The Lucius I'm seeing in this story is quickly becoming my favorite interpretation of Lucius that I have read in fanfiction. I just hope he and Hermione get over their reluctance to tell one another how they feel soon. It would make life for the both of them far easier than it has been. As usual, I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the next.

Ah poor Hermione and Lucius. They should practice Legilimency on each other so they could see how much they love each other. Again I think you do an excellent job explaining all their insecurities and emotions.

I have to laugh, so while Snape is not very forthcoming about his own life, he doesn

I believe that was my favorite chapter. (Well, it would have been better with some sex, but still). I like the small look into Lucius, and I like Severus in your story. I think he can be a good father, I really do.

Could so fall in love with the image of Lucius laying on the sofa with a pretty little blonde haired blue eyed baby nestled into his chest.



Oh, and since you asked when you reviewed...my first romance novel will come out in print in June of 2008 from Bantam Dell. As of right now it is titled "Loves Illusion" though that was not my title, they changed it. It will be released under R.A.Cooney...the second is still in editing and you know me, it will be there awhile LOL...so if you like romances, let me know, I get ARCs in Feb sometime, Ill be happy to send you a copy. :)

Rhonda

Yes, I think Lucius would be terrifically interested in his children, given the chance - but I'm guessing the Purebloods are a bit like the pre-war British aristocracy, who cultivated distance from their offspring, hiring staff to look after them from birth, then sending them away to school from the age of 8 or 9. Narcissa might have been happy with that, but Hermione definitely won't be! I reckon Lucien will have a happier childhood than Draco (as long as his parents can get along).

Great insights into Lucius' and Hermione's frames of mind regarding the status quo of their relationship. Lucius is just going to have to bite the bullet and accept that he can't change his bond with Hermione - it's there, and that's all there is to it, humiliating as he might think it. As for Hermione, she is going to have to try and change Lucius' habitat from his cloth of gold jungle (loved that image) to something more domestic! Jungles are no place for babies!

And of course I'm delighted that life is good for our Sev. So it bloody well should be! Lovely work...but I'm getting a bit worried that the evil plot must be coming back into play soon. Eek!

@34. aww i like seeing lucius as a family man. great chapter update soon

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