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schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Hermione is a bit of a pain, but an adversarial relationship is more likely between the two of them, I guess. She is not compromising either and in fact is being less fair when she knows that he has had no control at all for many years and still makes it a power struggle. One thing though, I might have missed something somewhere, but I thought that the pictures of Hermione out on the town were planted in the paper for Lucius to see. I did not realize that she was really going out. Shame on her and how can she think that it was not important. How would she have felt had Lucius gone out while she was in prison? I think she would have had a cow. Love your stories. p
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should see that Lucius is giving on all counts (while she is literally giving on none). I am looking forward to seeing how you are going to bring out the suffering each lived with when apart. As I said earlier, I really like your Harry, who does not approve of Lucius, but is a good friend to Hermione in the way of giving her support and being there for her. I have always disliked the way many stories portray her "best friends" as rigid, close minded bullies where she is concerned. The term bullies is only used because they are not kind and loving, but usually yelling and threatening to take their friendship away from her unless she does what they think she should. Wonder if Snape needs to give them both a wake up call so that they know the truth and not what is shown out of fear. p
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good Grief! I held my breath through the whole chapter after seeing it called Reunion Redux, waiting for Harry to show up while they were indisposed. Really love these two together, and am looking forward to them talking to each other instead of around each other. Excellent!! p
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Tsk, tsk Lucius. He should have known that it is always the quiet ones, or in Hermione's case, the innocent ones. He's been had and his worldly self should realize he cannot undo it. Love the story and that Hermione is starting to figure out that if she can be railroaded, he could have been also. p
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At least Hermione has Ginny on her side. I suspect her parents would serve Lucius breakfast in bed for life if they were told that he married their daughter to save her from the threatening guards. As all of yours, the story is excellent. Can't leave reviews each time as it cuts me off without notice, but each chapter is great and worthy of a glowing review. p
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A "little slytherin in you"? Pun intended, I'm sure if that slytherin is Lucius, huh? Standing back and watching out for his best friend is one of the smartest things I have ever seen him do. Still love Snape, but wonder how long it will take before he is framed for something if he gets too close. Excellent. p
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your story so far. Your Hermione/Lucius are among my favorites and it is especially good when you have them both brilliant and toe to toe in the beginning. Very good. p
person Betty
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can you please write a sequel for this story. Perhaps in the future some time where their 5 kids mainly girls are at marriage age or something?? I love your lucius and hermione stories!!!

Xoxxx
person MalfoyLover
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!
person RosiePosie
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to review this story when I read it. Like... Last week... Anyway! Another fantastic story. I love your writing style. You should dedinitely write something with Snape and Ginny as the main coupling, by the way. That would be epic...