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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great clues and the way you presented them were perfect. Giving away the information without giving up too much--you want the mystery to linger without giving the story away and you did it just right! Good job, keep up the excellent writing, and a happy turkey day to you too.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Draco in this story. Too bad we can't have a side story about him. Or can we?
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one of my favourites things about this story is reading the inner workings of lucius's mind, its just a work of art, the way he thinks and manipulates.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Draco as big brother and the added bonus of him getting Lucius in trouble. What a feast for Thanksgiving!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, can
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you really answer my question with all the review you get and all--Are we reading any time soon a bonding moment between Lucius and his younger son, Lucien? I would love to read a scene where Lucius is carrying his son and almost acting ooc. Great chapter. Yes. Things are heating up. I really love this Draco you portrait here. Love him! Great job. Update soon.
Lady Serpentina
Lady Serpentina
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the next.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh no, they've cracked the wards! That's not good news.
Draco was cute in this chapter; how apt that he should be working with the dragons. I suppose Hermione has a lot of provocation from Lucius to look forward to if he enjoys her more in bed that way. She'll have to watch her blood pressure!
I like the way they are simultaneously fighting small battles with each other, and yet also completely on each other's side. It's very piquant.
I hope you don't get too bogged down with all the housekeeping; enjoy your holiday xx.
Draco was cute in this chapter; how apt that he should be working with the dragons. I suppose Hermione has a lot of provocation from Lucius to look forward to if he enjoys her more in bed that way. She'll have to watch her blood pressure!
I like the way they are simultaneously fighting small battles with each other, and yet also completely on each other's side. It's very piquant.
I hope you don't get too bogged down with all the housekeeping; enjoy your holiday xx.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you LaBib! I hope you have a happy Thanksgiving as well!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Please add more soon!