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schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the green pudding - how funny! Poor Snape, though, suffering for his art there. Cute!

It was nice to have those scenes of the family together, just being themselves - and Lucius making his declaration without any trace of awkwardness. That was lovely.

But it's nearly finished - I would be upset, except there's a whiff of Regency Lucius on the horizon...So excited!

There were so many terrific touches in that chapter I couldn't possibly list them all. I did like Snape leaving when the conversation degenerated to bathroom humour - and Hermione's little revenge with the House Elf pension plans. I love your imagination. Great work.

person chyara
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an amazing story. I've been enjoying your stories for the past two [sleepless] nights.
I wish there were a way for me to be notified when you update though.

cheers!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I hope they figure things out soon. I can't wait to read more.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yummy, another update. it made my morning!

i'm so pleased to know that we will soon find out
who is responsible for pairing up our lovely couple.
i'm also pleased to know that Lucius has no intention
of not being completely Slytherin with the pair and
doing horrible, nasty, untold things to them.

*shudders*

i love it when he does bad things.

can't wait for the next installment and i don't think
i'll ever look at brownies or anything mint in the
same way again.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! Please add more!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*green and silver paint..* snapes velvety voyce just kills me!!* sigh*
Thank Merlin Ginny told Harry to grouw up! It is a bad side to the Potter boy!! If he hates someone ,the world must hate them also... Good for Ginny!
They are geeting close now!Can't wait for the next chapter!
person doodle
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I haven't figured it out yet. I will wait patiently here with my finger paints. So much more fun than a brush.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the next.