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schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I came across your story yesterday and have just finished reading all of the chapters. This is a wonderful story. I love the original meeting in the cell, and how the story has continued in so many twists and turns. I love your version of Lucius and Hermione. I was happy to see the you did not paint(excuse the pun) Hermione as a shrinking flower under Lucius. She is very intelligent and is a good match for Lucius in so many ways. I am glad you have continued this story and I am waiting the next couple of chapters. Thanks for a wonderful read so far.---K
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter very much. Enjoyable interaction and home life...it must be coming to blows though, for us to get something so sweet. I'd write this over-long review, but I'm busy with the green body paint....and I've borrowed Snape, since Lucius is decidedly taken, and I'll return him in a little while....
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for making Ginny say something to Harry. I hate when Harry doesn't learn to accept situations in stories. I loved the mint green dessert and the brownie reference. And the gossip between Snape and Lucius was great. Okay, I just enjoyed the whole chapter. There!
person Citten
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well my dear thank you for the chapter i really enjoyed it!! besides it is perfect for a rainy day! well i just loved the what hermione said to lucius after the desert was served! say you prays!!!!!!!!!!! haahhaahhahahahahahha i am still laughing! :) well it will be fun to see what happens to our slippery feinds. until next time! :)
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This "he was Slytherin through and through and hadn
person jw
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 32-39 - phew, I'm so glad Lucius and Hermione finally aired everything (well, except for Lucius' "serious problem," but at least she understands he had problems living apart from her). I'm still a bit surprised that Hermione went on those four arranged dates without knowing who exactly set her up on them; would those four guys know? Can't wait to find out who the baddies are! Thanks for the new chapters.
person DB1
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@39 great chapter update soon

*DB*
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this chapter. I'm really glad Ginny finally talked to Harry. And the scene between Lucien and his father. I can't wait to read the ending. =)

Lady Serpentina
person Damiana
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OoOh! I love paints! Hmm... *picks up green and chocolate brown* Yum! Mint chocolate!

Chapter 39! Oh...it comes to a close soon. *pouts a little* But there will be more written, yes? You won't disappear? Ok ok...I won't pester you. Onto the chapter!

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schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering, do you imagine Lucius is cut or uncut?