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Hi I'm one of the many lurkers, and I just wanted you to know that I really love and enjoy your stories!!!
They are so GREAT, and I always check my computer for updates.
So all I wanted to say is simply You Rock, and keep up the fantastic work :D

Very cool. I liked that. And I love that Scrimgemour made Severus and Lucius Aurors. That was a great idea.

Ah, very good. I should have known about the other conspirator. I never do well with reading mysteries. YOu had me fooled.

Revealed! Hmm... good chapter. Although, in retrospect, I feel as if perhaps the mystery part of the story could have been dealt with differently. more details at times and less at others. I guess it's hard to write the stuff. I used to read loads of mystery novels (Agatha Christie was a quasi constant childhood companion...odd no?) and I think that I expect a lot from my mysteries. There were so excellent moments yet this last chapter felt slightly rushed. Perhaps because we've clamored for a denouement so loudly and you wanted to give us one, of course.

As you can no doubt tell, I am of two minds. You are a really good writer and I expect that your mystery skills will improve with time. The story itself has still been more than awesome. You'll definetly have me along for the next read/ride.

Great story, I was somewhat surprised by who (no names given) the villins turned out to be. Great story.

Yes! Summary justice for the villains, lots of wand action and Harry talks to Lucius in an almost non-hostile way. Very climactic, as the chapter heading suggests (in quite a different way from your usual ;)). I must say, for somebody who has never done suspense or mystery writing before, this is a terrific job. I was kept guessing to the last - lots of 'Oh! Yes!' moments and flashbacks to earlier chapters going on as I read this. Great stuff.

But it's nearly finished, alas. Don't let that Muse of yours ever get away.

This was a great chapter. I am glad that Hermione, Luicus and Lucien are safe now. I can't wait to read the final chapter.

I like it. Please update soon.

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well my dear i really and truely loved that 'climax' loved -that was too easy part. ;) i wonder what husslecastles body will do the roses-red or white....hehehe. okay i have gone nuts....sorry. well now on to the sad and bitter sweet moment-PLEASE make it good and not too short if you please. i would like to enjoy it as much as possible. :)