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schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the end. it was so great. sweet and funny and just more of what i loved about this fic as a whole. so wonderful. i can't believe its over. i look forward to reading whatever you post next.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, he found the words he'd been looking for all that time...I think it's a Slytherin deficiency, to have such difficulty with the L word; they seem to think it makes them vulnerable. Bless 'em.

Father of five, eh? I love that little theory about Ginny's popularity with the boys being all about her genes - makes a lot of sense!

Ohhhh, no more until 2008; can we last that long? Have to get one of those countdown calendars and cross the days off with big black Xs.

Fantastic job; works beautifully as both a mystery and a love story. Thanks!
person Citten
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well honey as always wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! truely. i will miss this story terribly. yes i am sure that the roses will be beautiful and that he will have one of his famous smirks when he is thinking or looking at them. :) hehe. well now i now that lucius says he would like all boys but i bet he would become a puddle with a little girl-i would love to see that spoiling her and being very, very protive! oh i want to see that could you make a story that is a sequel to this years later and show that the baby girl and have some other crisis? well just a taught, think about it-i know you would make it great! loved the ending of this story! where they make there best arguements and best dicisions. that makes me smile. :) until next time-tidbit. ;)
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. This was a lovely way to end it. When I went back to re-read this story, I guess I never realized that Lucius never did say I love you to Hermione. The ending was perfect and I love that Hermione was able to surprise the hell out of him with wanting to have more children. Priceless..

And I love that you are writing another Lucius and Hermione story, can't wait, I will be on the look out.

Have a good Holiday as well.
person mary
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it! I could imagine his face when Hermione said she wanted more babies. Looking forward to the next story!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! Great! Great-ness! You must begin a new Hermione/Lucius story immediately! I (and I'm sure many others) demand it! It must include Hermione being as devious as Lucius and the both of them outwitting one another at every turn! I loved this story and it quickly became one of my favorites as you quickly became one of my favorite authors. I look forward to my demand being fulfilled at some point.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, nice ending. I like that Lucius gets to keep his devious ways without being what he once was. The compromise between them is perfect - exactly why I adore this couple and your work. Can't wait for your next story!
person equinox
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Truly a great story to read. This was my first L/H fic to read and I have loved the experience. I also went back and read your story, 'the wedding'. I had just as much fun. I'll be on the lookout for your next story, until then. Happy Holidays! :)
person doodle
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad it is over. Thank you for the amazing journey. I hope you are inspiried again soon.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps*

an excellent ending, my dear, and well worth
the wait. thank you for a lovely ride.

*blessings~
ldf