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What a delightul conclusion!  I liked the ruthless-and-selfish-but-never-abusive-to-Hermione version of Lucius in this story perhaps best of all.  He doesn't change out of all recognition, and Hermione's fine with that, for the most part, as she manages him to the best of anyone's ability.  :)

oooh, this was marvellous!

i actually suspected Percy Weasley (as per request i will not mention if rightly so, to avoid obvious spoilers to other revievers ;) ) i mean, from kettle norms to making money from stolen toiletpaper, a real "papergangsta" carrer i'd say ^^

really, five kids? i dont know why so many authors want hermione to want/have so many children. as a mother you can hardly do one child justice, you will always be unfair to one with two. poor sods who have five... or rather four siblings.i have three sisters and honestly, two at the most would have been more than sufficient for me.

i adore your lucius ;) though there are moments, where i want to hit him with 'hogwarts a history' hard.

Is there ever going to be some kind of oneshot or sidestoy about severus' brown paint and brownies ;) i'd love to read that. i am of course not curious at all...

I'm looking forward to this story. I've enjoyed all your other stories.

Looking forward to more pieces of the puzzle in the upcoming chapter. Really enjoying the story so far!

what happened to your format?!:O

Excellent, as yours all are. You could have a whole series with SS and LM as aurors by night...kind of like batman and superman (dressed in black). Love the way you brought Lucius and Hermione together and the way her parents acted toward him. Very enjoyable read. As always, thanks for sharing. p

Lucius needs to man up and call Hermione on the betrayal. One of them is going to have to resolve their issues or they will just get further and further apart. I love when you write about Crooks. It always makes me want one...of course, I want a Lucius also so there you have it. great, so far. p

Whether she wanted it or not, Hermione's love for Lucius is shining through and I hope that Lucius sees it for what it is. She is still so protective of him and even though she does not want him to hold a grudge, she looks only with disdain on those that wronged her husband and then tried to do it again.
Love Draco most when he is giving Hermione her due and accepting her without changing who he is. Pansy is really out of the loop if he has to send her signals not to insult Hermione. Would love to see her become an ally for Hermione through Draco telling her what he is thinking.
When so many are against Lucius, you don't know who, if any of them, is behind trying to ruin him. Gotta love it. p

Excellent and I am so glad that he is finally going to address the anger between them, especially since the cause is not what either thinks. Also look forward to Hermione accepting that some of the things Lucius does are to take care of her, not control her. She just has a preconceived notion of the behaviors of the common (not!) Slytherin. Classical conditioning, I am sure. It would have helped had Lucius kept Hermione informed regarding the attempts to get at them. Gets better all the time. p

Yay! You know that this is what I have been waiting for all along. And it is all coming together now with the trail that will probably wind up in the same place in the end. Very good!! p