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for All the Right Moves

by QTArtGirl725

person luvhp
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You go girl..And Draco, TWO!???
Yeah! Love it, love it, love it!
At first I was questioning where Draco was during her labor, but thankfully he came back safe and sound to be with his family!!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I BLOODY LOVE IT!!!!
IT"S BLOODY FANTASTIC!!!

PLEASE CONTINUE,
ANGEL
person Rosamund
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job...I think I've perused this story before and just read most of it now. Awesome! My only complaint was Ginny mixing in with them...yuck! But that's your writing right ;) Oh, my other complaint would be to those nasty picking reviewers. I know those type...one of mine was nitpicked several times, despite my disclaimer on the issue...and surprise! Just found out they were all wrong themselves. :) Anyway, happy writing and glad that you are continuing!
person Tenar10r
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story, and I like it a lot!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so precious!
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey
nice story you've got there
there were minor mistakees in your sentences, but as u said, they could be overlooked
waiting for ur update......... i want to know wat draco's reaction is (make it real emotional :P) when hermione delivers her child (plz do make them twins!)
keep rockin!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you go!! I think you are absolutely right!!
I love the story!!
person luvhp
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad you are going to continue, I love this story!
Sometimes it's hard to take criticism, I've learned to deal with it over here, I figure "the many outwiegh the few" :)
Keep your chin up, your fingers typing and your spirits raised!!!!

Happy Holidays!
person Fallen Star
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I have read it twice now and each time I love it!! I can't wait for more.....

Update soon please!!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you may be being a little bi harsh. after reading the reviewer what they said was not ment in a nasty way at all. But just giving you some advice. They are not hating on your story at all. A good beta can change a god fic in to a great master piece. I really would considor getting one i have read a good few fan fiction and nearly all the great ones have a beta.

Dont take what was said to harshly it was just ment to help

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