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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does Draco find out? Need chapter 6!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry just might get burned kissing both of them! I sooo need chapter 5!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice!!
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Put a bloddy warning for the Ron/Harry parts please!!!
What is harry not supose to tell!??!it does'nt make sense at all!
What is harry not supose to tell!??!it does'nt make sense at all!
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. I think I read it to fast.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, like the beginning, but I hope that the chapters get longer.
Is this going to be a threesome? Is there a dom/sub relationship? Keep going it sounds interesting...
Is this going to be a threesome? Is there a dom/sub relationship? Keep going it sounds interesting...
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What was the dream? Why would you have Harry/Ron under Harry/Draco? Harry/Ron is just wrong. They are so much better as friends/brothers. Your first chapter was good but the second you didn't say that they were in the car, just that they were kissing, taking clothes off but didn't go too far because King's Cross came up. It didn't sound as if they were even on the way to King's Cross. I hope that you will explain the dream soon. You have my curiosity raised.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not Harry and Ron please! Ick! And why did Draco get up in Harry's face? Why not threaten them both? And he wouldn't be able to walk? Hmmm. Sooo need chapter 3!