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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great and go bella .... please update soon i would love to read more ..
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great ... and i love how they get along ... please update soon i would love to read more .. alter for now
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story! You are doing a great job...I think that you should make it a bit harder for them to fall into bed though...Jack won't respect her if she just falls back with her legs spread, and Bella would never go with a man who wasn't strong enough to hold her...i love the build up of sexual tension...make them work for it! in the end, it will be better...
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh its getting good. As always I look forward to more.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .... and how bella got norrington to leave.... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still very interesting...i am a bit confused though...maybe it will work out in the next chapter...
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I can honestly say you are a first to have me actually like Bella, this will be interesting to read.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't really read many stories with bella in them, but this is really good. I would really like to see bella and jack together.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting...can't wait to see what you do next.