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for The Black Riddle

by Extraho

person Shadi88
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and don't think it needs any changing except for some grammer, but other than that it's wonderful.
Hope you get back to this fic soon. Best of luck and good wishes to you.
Butterfly Beauty
person Jaylynn
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a naughty kitty...its something my cat would do, especially since I think he hates my computer anyway and always tries to sit between me and it when I am on it. Sorry about the lack of available chargers around and I look forward to more when you can post again.
person Wilder
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ya! i love this story! Go Jack! and i have to say that your Bella is my absolute favorite version i have ever read, and i have read alot! :glomp: can't wait to see what happens next!
person LunaSimi
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bawls T_T* i wanna new chapter to read!! It was just getting good!!! *whaaaaaa T.T*

=^_^=
Tigeress
person Wilder
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* oh, i want to cry, i know he is just missunderstanding but it is still so perfectly angsty... Bella you better whip him around quick, ease his worries cause that power guy thinks you don't want him!! dang your version of Jack Sparrow blows all others out of the water! i love it! *huggles*
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I look everyday to see if this is updated and then...and then you pull this. Please please please and another please update soon and make her say yes!
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! I am glad you are only changing jack for a few days. I look forward to more.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes its short but it has some interesting info in it. I will be looking worward to more as always.
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But...But ...but I like jack the way he was ( goes to pout in a corner). Besides that it was a great chapter and as alway I look forward to more.
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its good but you ended up posting the last chapter twice. Look forward to more.