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I just finished Coral and must say that I fell utterly in love with your story. I also will admit, with only a slight blush, that I did enjoy the added lemons. I did not want the story to end, but felt it was a beautiful completion. Thanks for posting it for everyones enjoyment. Eagerly awaiting more, Bethany.

I just read this entire story. And I must say this is one of the best fics I've ever read. You deserve so much more credit for this!! It's truly amazing. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. You have true talent.

Thank you for such a great read!

Your other reviewer is right; this really deserves more reviews. I love it so far. Keep it up!

I'm on chapter 5 now... but I have to say, this story is absolutely amazing! I think you should give up fanfic and go pro! :3 You certainly have a knack with words! And although I am afraid that the pairing may squick me (depending on how you describe Ollivander, as I haven't gotten that far yet) I am absolutely enthralled with the story thus far, and plan to keep reading it anyway :D

The descriptions you provide for the reader are just amazing and so well thought out! It's like watching a movie while I read. Well done!

Well what a wonderful story you are working on here. I am hooked!
You have a wonderful way with writing. I am hoping too see a few more characters from the books though.
But keep updating!!

All right. I have seen this, and seen this and seen this and now it's my turn to say my piece. :) Okay, you deserve a lot more credit than you are getting for this. You have set the scenes really well in the first chapter, and I plan to continue reading your story. It might take me a while since I am writing, but I will read. I must say, the Ollivander aspect is kind of scary at first, I mean, it's new. But never fear, I will make the journey, because your writing takes my mind off the characters involved. :) Thank you for sharing and not giving up. I will keep you posted on my progress.