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for Living in Darkness

by Thedarkunicorn

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets more && more interesting as it progresses.
I was wondering when Draco would find out it was Hermione.
I reallyy like how youu put so much of the characters' emotions so in depth in the story,
A lot of authors have this pairing fall in love without any explanation of their feelings,
But youu made it prettyy clear which is good.
With the Fleur thing,
I have an idea of who it may have really been just under polyjuice potion,
I think youu put in a clue when Harry went into a certain someone's room && found a bunch of potion bottles,
But, I'm not too sure because I am often wrong about these kinds of things.
Anywayss,
Thank youu so much for updating so often && quickly,
No one ever really does that anymore.
Perhaps youu could do it again ?

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayy !
I was finally right about something,
I'm so proud of myself l0l
Amazing chapter,
Gotta feel bad for Regulus (sp?) though,
Being somewhat undead like that,
That's a terrible curse.
I'm happy Melanie's dead though,
She's a little whore && deserved everything she got && more.
I don't trust Blaise though,
There had to be a reason he gave Hermione that potion,
Which makes me very worried for her.
Please update soon,
I'm dying to know what happens next !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so totally hot!!
person nymphbot
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i remember from chapter three is im in love with the piano scene which is awesome awesome
is one of the death eaters lucius? he has a tendency to show up at the worst times

i still like super dark draco
even if he can be sweet
i dont ever want him to not kill because of hermione
because then its not draco right?
person Kilalla
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i fucking hate you and your cliff hangers! lol

ok seriously you cant kill Draco, unless your ready to end the story, in my humble opinion. lol

Draco was perfect in that last chapter though, absolutly perfect :)
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that this is a greatr story, very well written. I'm glad you update quick cause I LOVE this story, Draco is amazing and oh so sexy!!
person Kilalla
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn you!! why must you leave me at the cliff, gosh you suck lol
grea stroy anyway though, its kinda creepy how harry kills...innocent people...idk if i like that... but eh its your story and its still a great read :)
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I love how it updates quickly and you have good skills lol congrats on them and I hope draco goes dark on the damn death eaters lol
person nymphbot
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
evil evil evil

oh my god
i want to know dracos reaction right this second!
its killing me

great chappie
loved the lightning in the background in their spur of the moment passion
loved how he found out it was her

so true that she would never tell him her name
but others will
person Kilalla
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... he's pissed... i love it... i dont htink Draco should go too dark, i think he should be pissed really pissed, but then he should get over it, unless it was Hermione's plan all along, but im like 99% sure it wasnt so idk. lol

you update fast.. i like that :)