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for A Shadowy End

by SilentTremor

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to the readers who have been waiting for a chapter to be added on. I've just written a new chapter that needs a little work but I will post soon. I'm sorry to keep you waiting, i didn't realise so many people actually liked my story. I'll try to update more often but I'm not promising anything. Even I get writer's block once in awhile. Thank you to all the people who left me such wonderful reviews. I look forward to reading them after every update.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for you to update your story. Then I see your author's note. I truly do love your story. Its fascinating. You know how to weave words into a web that draws all of us readers in like flys. Can't wait for an update.
Angel.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love your story,
person Katia
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the badass Hermione and Ginny. I really like the idea you've got going here and can't wait to read more.
person Tira
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THATS NOT FAIR!!!
I"VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
person kittycat30
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and it's great! Sorry you're not getting enough reviews. I'm not brave enough to write, but I do love to read. I hope you update soon!
person Nancy
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean refine I think it is excellent.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. I was shocked by Ginny's reaction to her brother, although he did deserve it. I can't wait to read more. I am wait to see what happens between Hermione and Snape. Please continue.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*waves * Hi


You reviewed my story, I'll review yours.

I don't see anything wrong with it to the current chapter. However, you might want to make your chapters a little longer. Not much, just a little.

Your one of the few author's that can actually write a dark story without making it too bloody or squimmish. I like that.

I hope to see more of this story and thanks again for reading my own. I love the idea of a bomb but how is Severus gonna get out? You can't blow him to ashes..lol..

Nice work. I score you perfect.
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?