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for A Shadowy End

by SilentTremor

schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far. Having the girls as the strong characters (without the boys involved in their business) is refreshing and great! Ginny has never been one of my favorites, but when dealing with Hermione here, she is bearable. Looking forward to reading more. (I will not be able to leave comments after each chapter as the site cuts reviews off once you have hit some random number saying you can only enter one. Sorry.) p
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! My first thought was how Snape was going to take it. I was glad to see that he got respect for them. Now Ron will probably tell on them out of jealousy because he likes the attention. p
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
We could see that coming with Ron and Harry as they have the mentality of a gnat. Too bad that the girls already helped them pass their exams. Anyway, it would serve them right if they were kidnapped by LV's deatheaters and had to be rescued as part of the girls taking the bad guys out. Love, love your Severus. He is great. p
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. I've caught up with your story. Please tell me that you are going to finish it. p
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say that this is a surprise and since I officially start my christmas break in two days, I'm thinking of finishing the story. It's been a while and although in personal life I've achieved two degrees, I think it's best not to keep you guys waiting any longer. I'll be sure to post something perhaps this afternoon or later tonight when I've returned from my country drive with my beloved boyfriend. Thank you to everyone for the lovely reviews and I'll do my best not to disappoint you and finish this story quickly (not too quickly since it's christmas time and new years but definitely enough to satisfy your hunger for the story.

Blessed Be,
Sandra
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*looks at the magical score-board to see it Sandra's got her required three reviews for the next chapter yet...* Yes, I know your away, but it was still fun to type. Poor Severus! I thought Hermione and Ginny were just kidding with the girlfriend comments...but I see ( through the steam coming off my monitor...) that they were whole-heartedly telling the truth!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. Poor Severus, maybe he should just invite himself to join them. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person CrystalRayne
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait for you to update!
person Lyssa
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In fear that you wont update without reviews...I liked it...more please
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus, two young women sharing his home. I can't wait to read more to see what happens between them.