rate_review Reviews

Dang that sounds fun.

This story is great! I think Fawkes should ditch the old fart and go to Harry and Draco. :)

well hun i loved it. I am a huge fan of Lotr. I mean Legolas was just YUM. Wow, Legolas/Aragorn, Legolas/Haldir, all hot! So Harry's descended from him is he? I like i like a lot. Dont worry bout the spelling mistakes the other reviewer pointed out, theyre ony little things and dont matter. But just thought i'd add its Arwen, not Arwyn. Dont care bout that tho, the way you incorporated the lotr bloodlines was totally believable. Love Harry's new bod and cant wait to see Draco and everybody elses reaction.

Update when you can and thanks for reviewing my story!

I really don't have much to say this time. I do still love this story, I just have nothing to complain about. Plus, there is nothing really that I can compliment. This chapter was just to perfect. And your a/n's explained most everything.
I did catch everything about TLOTR. I am now reading the books, but I have all the movies and have seen them countless times.
Well keep up the great work.
Kat

I still enjoy this. Keep it up.

(sp?)fidelus is Fidelius and should always be capitalized...Scrimgeour, Rufus Minister...if you need help with spelling canon names, type 'Harry Potter Lexicon' in your browser, it helps tremendously!

It's not Kretcher, it's Kreacher...the story is good, but canon spelling is a must!

Well defiantly...definitely are two different words and this one is commonly misspelled by a host of writers...misspelled words made a reader 'trip' over the story rather than become engrossed. It's inportant to edit, edit, edit...I know I'm a spelling nazi. But it will make your story better. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Soooo need chapter 6!

thank you for answering my question. That is what I tought also, but I wanted to get someone elses point of view on it. Again, I like this chapter. I do hope that you get some time to update soon though. I do so love reading your work. Keep up the great work.
Kat