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by heaven56

person satine1313
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely perfect. Kepp going. Can't wait for more.
person sanda
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Heksy
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, who's complaining?
First chapter up yesterday, next today.
If you keep up this pace, you will run out of chapters fast, hahaha.
Again I would like to compliment you on outlining some basics.
Maybe you should deepen the background a bit, later on?
Thanks for sharing.
person Leentjef
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
person Heksy
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this really has potential.
In my humble opinion you should really go through with this fic.
I like the fact that you outlined a few ground rules and keeping Sev in character.
Keep it up.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so fucking HOT! I love it!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, don't stop there!!! *pouts*

Wow... this is really hot so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I adore sub!Harry and Dom!Snape, and I really hope you update soon!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
guh *drools* please tell me there will be more to this. bloody yummy love!!
person Japhia
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is gonna be hot! I'm bookmarking it so I can check for updates! I wonder if this master/slave relationship will be the same as normal for muggles or if it will go beyond that.