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by NutsAboutHarry

person Raptoer
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
2 things, 1 I meant to put "seen" not "been" in my last review, and 2nd, kinda odd place to end a chapter, but chances are that either you wanted to get the chapter up but hadn't finished it, or that you hit a block and wanted to put the chapter up.
Either way I still love your writing.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon, I really wanna see Harry teach the kiddies. Ialso wanna see those missing 19 years that Rowling pulled on us.
person Raptoer
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very well done. One of the best Fan Fic writters I've been in a long time. I didn't imagine harry being that exhibitionist, but I suppose 3 years with ginny could easily change that, and come to think of it he is a quidditch player so he must at least not despise being in the lime light.
person mistyfur
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL I'm really enjoying this story so far. Loved your version of Quidditch ;)
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe... tallk about pent up sexual frustration! Harry and Ginny: making up for three years of lost time in one night. ;)

Good smut. Keep up the good work! ^^
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait.. this story was started prior to the books release? or have you been editing it? Cause alot of this stuff is pretty dead on. o_O


(Great story, btw!)
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! be careful what you talk about.
Maybe a warning for those of us who haven't read the new book!

I thought your story was good so far, I would like you to continue as you were despite whatever's happening in TDH.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story line so far, please continue.
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really REALLY well written. Good job. Looking forward to upcoming chapters!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soo cute!! can't wait to see what happens next, and i will be bugging you until you update missy!! :) much love and kisses!