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by NutsAboutHarry

schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your writing.Your story is nearly as addictive as J.K.'s.I log on everyday just to see if you have updated it yet.I hope you add to it soon. By the way, I was wondering if there was any chance of Ginny possibly becoming pregnant?Or maybe even Hermione?

Love to hear more from you soon!

schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really really like this story and want to know what happens next. I like how it flows so well with DH, which I just finished reading!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im hooked man

keep em coming loving it so far
person jhagen88
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u might want to include tom clancy in your disclaimer. Jack Ryan is the main character from "the hunt for red october"
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this. Other than the few typos its good. Oh, and the Name Lupin is still in one of the chapters (I think the Hogwarts party one).


Keep writing please!
person Isake
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He He "rumpy pumy" is a good term...excellent work again!
person timkhj
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT work. Completely impressed. Great story!
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS JUST AS ADDICTIVE AS THE ACTUAL SERIES!! Brilliant writing, vivid sex scenes entwined with a captivating love story with fantastic sub-plots! I MUST read the next chapter!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUT IT UP!!

thanks

uri
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know u missed a referance to Lupin during the party where they ask Harry to be DADA teacher
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude Keep it coming. It's a great story thus far.