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for The Downfall

by RaveXTM

schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was pretty good!
person Rosei
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Good interesting story!
Don't stop now!!!
Thanks,
R
person Danine
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O'm intrigued, but admittedly a little confused by the dialog with Harry and Draco. They speak so cryptically, either I've A) missed something/skipped over it B) not smart enough to understand what they aren't saying right out and C) It's probably B. I get that they are under attack by DE's for a week or something, what I'm missing is what Draco was trying to tell Harry at the end. Does he know, does he not? That's what I mean. Anyway, it was good nonetheless!
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 please! How did Hermione and Neville die? Did they try to leave the castle?