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As long as there are updates I am happy. It is still readable, so updates are my major concern. Keep up the great work.

Read this on another site! I sooo need chapter 4!

love this so far, I have old eyes that can only read with the font enlarged. You should take this as quite a complement that I went ahead and read anyway because it was an effort big time for me to read anything that small. Also because of said age, I would have no clue as to tell you how to correct this, but please keep going and I am sure you will work out the kinks. I love Harry's interactions with the baby, his experiences at fatherhood, and just everything about this story so far. I loved the letter at the beginning, very effective way to set this up, you left just enough unanswered questions to keep it interesting and keep us wanting more. My only bit of advice so far on anything to change, is that I would edit out a sentence or two of the part where Herm was waking Harry up. I found myself saying to myself "alright he's awake, on with story" The only reason I am pointing this out is that this is so good and I am a Virgo and I just can't help myself. I am writing one of my own right now and am finding it difficult to judge what I have written, so hope you don't mind me pointing that out. Other than that one teeny, tiny thing I think this is really first rate and hope you update soon. Can't wait to see how you handle Draco's reaction!

Great story so far. Cant wait to see what Draco does. Could you change the font of the story though? The one you are using sorta makes my eyes bleed. lol. Other than that, the story is awesome. :)

awe that was cute but whats with the writing it was altogether that i could barely read it.

Actually this is quite interesting and Harry did live through one hell of child-carrying, child-birth, child-caring as well as being MOTHERED at all time...

But how would others react? How would the school react? How would Draco react? And most of all - how would all the gay men react?

What I could read, was readlly interesting. I'll read the rest when the font changes.

i absolutely loved the letter! i can so see Harry writing like that! I can't wait to see what is up next!