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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay update! i was hoping you hadn't given up on this! so great :) i love obsessive draco!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa..the last chapter I read...where she tells him she's pregnant and he takes her aside and shags her while making her repeat it over and over was HOT! You're good.....I like this story...I wish you would continue....develop some more plot and keep the D/s stuff going....It's pretty hot stuff.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story please update soon!!!!!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting storyy,
It kind of reminds me of a story I read before,
It's a Draco/Ginny fic on here called What Is Love?
But it's like a marriage fic where Draco forces Ginny to marry him && it's basically their journey through marriage, having kids and eventually Ginny falls for him,
It's a veryy good fic && if you're into that couple I highly suggest reading it.
But anywayss,
This story has a lot of potential,
But I do have some problems with it.
Hermione falling for Draco after he rapes her, kills her friends && forces her to bond with him doesn't seem believable in this story,
But it can be made believable.
The story I mentioned before could help youu in that area thoughh.
Anywayss,
I look forward to an update,
I'm sure youu can make this storyy live up to its potential.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
It kind of reminds me of a story I read before,
It's a Draco/Ginny fic on here called What Is Love?
But it's like a marriage fic where Draco forces Ginny to marry him && it's basically their journey through marriage, having kids and eventually Ginny falls for him,
It's a veryy good fic && if you're into that couple I highly suggest reading it.
But anywayss,
This story has a lot of potential,
But I do have some problems with it.
Hermione falling for Draco after he rapes her, kills her friends && forces her to bond with him doesn't seem believable in this story,
But it can be made believable.
The story I mentioned before could help youu in that area thoughh.
Anywayss,
I look forward to an update,
I'm sure youu can make this storyy live up to its potential.
Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter...i can't believe they did it with their boys right behind the door! Ick...lol i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE your story. Please continue.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another AMAZING chapter!!!! Please update I really really really can't wait to see what happens next.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this fic has really got me hooked. I will be checking back a lot for a new chapter. Very good!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I think it is really good and highly believable. I hope you continue it, I think it has a lot of potential. Wonderful, darling! Just wonderful!