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for Indago:3

by lojenn

person kittycat30
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with her! Harry has been treated horribly. I've read all the stories and I get the creature stuff, but I just can't see him really putting up with that treatment. I hope Maia helps her father see how he's treated her dad... Will she end up the same? I hope not!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm with the other reviewer. I don't care for Kellas at all. Not even a wee bit. I am also hoping this is not turning away from Drarry and into a yuri that would turn me off the story a bit.
person cerichan
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would almost like for Maia to find someone else, I don't care mich for that girl right now!
We'll see...
person NightLo
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...quite a hard way to learn of what and who you are...and being a Malfoy, esp. being the oldest, well trained and future Lady, Maia has a rough road ahead. However, as Harry once said, she must find her own way, and better she asked and found more before anything happen...

You know, I do hope, no distraught scene will happen...e.g. something like Indago 2...
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess Maia got a first hand lesson in Supero's there, huh? Poor, stupid kid... Yes, a perfect mixture of her parents... lol.

I can not wait to see how this goes...
person cynaga
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really nice~! Love your work. This is as enjoyable for me as the previous more "adventure" parts. I guess I am slightly sad to see it turn into a yuri fic (my own preference is yaoi is all). Am I correct in assuming the twins boys are human? Or is that to be revealed?
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting good. I can't wait to read your next chapter, so I hope you up-date really soon.

Elle the Evil one
person NightLo
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely, esp. the twins - they are really cute but they can be great trouble makers...

BTW, they now are nearly a pack...but would Maia get jealous over her daddy?
person NightLo
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually - with such background, such special inheritance and upholdings, Maia can choose anyone...esp. her infatulation with her Sev...

Would that cause an issue?

And finally - we have reached a present and future soon...
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! One of the twins is Sev's!!!!

And Lucius wants Maia to marry at 16!?!!?!?!?! wtf?