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by lojenn

person Japhia
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dammit I wish we could get another scene of Maia and Kellas again! ^^
person cynaga
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just gets better and better, doesn't it, love?
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I go away for the weekend and you've put up 5 more chapters!!! YAY!

Poor Maia... just when she might have been able to get to know Kellas a little bit better, the Fathers have to come out and make a big production of things... ugh...
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Read the last six chapter, gotta say it's getting good. I hope Maia learns fast. Indago 3 isn't as Dark as the first one and second, which I'm glade. It kinda creeped me out that Harry could handle everything that was thrown at him, but would break down later on. But any ways I hope Kelly and Maia get together soon, I'm staring to like Kellas now that she's not so threating. Well do what you do and up-date soon.

Elle the Evil one
person NightLo
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I begin to see this story of Harry's instead of Maia's and Bran's and Az's...Harry is reliving his nightmare and so do Draco and Snape...actually any wrong move from other superos would destroy the delicate balance of this...and Maia will regret her own actions...
person cynaga
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant
person cerichan
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well..they have to explain, she's not a baby anymore.
Something I've meant to ask you since few days ago: What happened to Hrmione and Ron? Did they lost any contact with Harry?
Why Maia is so mean with the Weasleys?
Harry did not tell her of his best friend?
Or, is it just because of Draco influence?
*confused*
person cynaga
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I take it all back. You've got me so good now - yuri or no. You write the best characters and the way you show their psychological interactions is wonderful. I am loving this one as much as the first two. The new flavor is sweet on my tongue.


Thanks for the DM/SS/HP threesome last chapter~!
person NightLo
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...if the warning is not Femslash, please make it not as N/C...I hate that kind of thing, as I have suffered enough in Indago2... > _ <

And what are the twins? Dominants or Submissive? If they are submissive, then Harry would be in a very difficult place - I hope other supero would not 'force' him to have more children!!!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't seem to get enough of this AU. Loved your first two stories, and this one has me checking up on it everyday as well. Great work so far, I'm definitely one of your fans!