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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Long, deep sigh*
I just reread the entire series. God. I wish they would just keep going and going. The FIRST time I read these, I nearly stopped at the beginning of the first story, because I didn't like how mean Draco was. Can you imagine? I wouldn't have been able to spend weeks rereading them! Everything seems so well planned out... A couple times (of course, I don't remember them now because that would be too convenient) I sat back and thought, 'that fits in so well... I wonder if that had been planned since the beginning'. If those things were intentional, I'm jealous of you and your crazy abilities. If they were unintentional, that's awesome!!
Okay, to pick my favourite moment from the trilogy, I'd say it was Maia's birth. That absolutely killed me. Every time I reread these, I read that part twice. I don't entirely know why I love it so much, but it's so... basic. Ugh. And of course, the smut is decent. I guess.
... Of course I'm kidding because it's awesome. I realize I keep using that word but I'm tired and my vocabulary isn't where it should be. Anyway, it's weird reading an actual story and looking forward to smut. I say that because, in my experience, the story is really well written, or the smut is really well written. Rarely both. You, my friend, have both :D:D Makes it sooo much more fun to read.
Okay, this has been a long review (the longest review wouldn't be enough for you because you're incredible but I'm tired... as previously mentionned) so I'm leaving.
Love it! In case that was unclear... :S :D
I just reread the entire series. God. I wish they would just keep going and going. The FIRST time I read these, I nearly stopped at the beginning of the first story, because I didn't like how mean Draco was. Can you imagine? I wouldn't have been able to spend weeks rereading them! Everything seems so well planned out... A couple times (of course, I don't remember them now because that would be too convenient) I sat back and thought, 'that fits in so well... I wonder if that had been planned since the beginning'. If those things were intentional, I'm jealous of you and your crazy abilities. If they were unintentional, that's awesome!!
Okay, to pick my favourite moment from the trilogy, I'd say it was Maia's birth. That absolutely killed me. Every time I reread these, I read that part twice. I don't entirely know why I love it so much, but it's so... basic. Ugh. And of course, the smut is decent. I guess.
... Of course I'm kidding because it's awesome. I realize I keep using that word but I'm tired and my vocabulary isn't where it should be. Anyway, it's weird reading an actual story and looking forward to smut. I say that because, in my experience, the story is really well written, or the smut is really well written. Rarely both. You, my friend, have both :D:D Makes it sooo much more fun to read.
Okay, this has been a long review (the longest review wouldn't be enough for you because you're incredible but I'm tired... as previously mentionned) so I'm leaving.
Love it! In case that was unclear... :S :D
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that you said that only boys could be supero???? I am soooo confused!!! but the story still rocks!
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read this third story of Indago. You are an amasing author. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm doing one long review on all three Indago stories, wich I have spent the last days reading one after the other...I don't know what to say, this is soooo amazingly, wondefully perfectly good that I'm speechless. Or almost at least :D. And right now I'm in tears because the perfect ending and because there is no more story. I haven't been able to drag myself from this story, almost not even for sleep :D
I don't usually like those "Harry as a magical being"- stories but this one I loved. Dom/Sub-stories is not a favorite either, I read it but don't seek it out. But again, in this story I loved it...maybe because Harry still said what he felt most of the time and Draco listened (most times). And Sev as a third party fitted perfectly. And I have been yelling at the screen since Kellas first was introduced because she is perfect for Maia!! I felt as the grown ups should have told the kids more of what happened and why they (the children) should be careful...if they had they wouldn't have the problems they had...and there wouldn't be a story :D so how frustrated I was in this story and in the first one when Harry was thrown down the stairs because Draco didn't let him explain, I still trusted you all the way :)
Congrats to a perfect triology, it's not that many people that manage to keep all parts of a thriology, especially as long as yours is, intresting all the way, but you managed!! I am sad that I have read all of this but it ended perfectly!! Good work. I'm looking forward to read more of your stories, you are a talented writer!!
Hugs from Betty!!
Ps. Sorry if the language is a bit strange, english is not my first language and it is late here so I'm tired and my brain don't function in writting right now!
I don't usually like those "Harry as a magical being"- stories but this one I loved. Dom/Sub-stories is not a favorite either, I read it but don't seek it out. But again, in this story I loved it...maybe because Harry still said what he felt most of the time and Draco listened (most times). And Sev as a third party fitted perfectly. And I have been yelling at the screen since Kellas first was introduced because she is perfect for Maia!! I felt as the grown ups should have told the kids more of what happened and why they (the children) should be careful...if they had they wouldn't have the problems they had...and there wouldn't be a story :D so how frustrated I was in this story and in the first one when Harry was thrown down the stairs because Draco didn't let him explain, I still trusted you all the way :)
Congrats to a perfect triology, it's not that many people that manage to keep all parts of a thriology, especially as long as yours is, intresting all the way, but you managed!! I am sad that I have read all of this but it ended perfectly!! Good work. I'm looking forward to read more of your stories, you are a talented writer!!
Hugs from Betty!!
Ps. Sorry if the language is a bit strange, english is not my first language and it is late here so I'm tired and my brain don't function in writting right now!
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I enjoy this story. The first one is the best, mostly cause it's the first but this one's danm close. The second one was good but... very dramatic. Which it had to be of course. I'm sure I've reviewed this many times. But since I reread the first one and this one than I thought I should review as well. I hope you write more. I love these stories of yours they're perfect. I also adore "By fair or Foul Means". Though I always kind of wished you wrote a second one to that one. I always felt that Lucius would get very involved with Snape and his new child, which would send Draco in a tit. He's use to being center in his father's life specially since in that story Lucius didn't seem to care much for his wife. But now I'm talking about a completely different story. So sorry. I love story's on the parent relationship though. Draco and Lucius is wonderful because it's not all happy flowers and the parent isn't perfect and they do make mistakes that they do have to some times amend for. I always felt that way with Molly and Ron though too. Totally blubbering now. Have you ever thought of Doing a DracoxRon? Now that would be a challenge. hehe ^^
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gods!!!! I absolutly loved all three of the Indago series. Just finished them today and wanna go back and start at the beginning again :\ Now don't get me wrong cos I love Harry and Draco and throwing Sev into the mix...pure hotness but the storyline was so amazing and complete it would have done great as an original. I just have two questions and one was probably answered in the story or is so obvious everyone but I already knows the answer...the Weasley kid was Percys right?? Ok thats the first and now for no. 2. will we ever see what happens to Maia and Kellas? I loved Kellas. She seemed so real. Would you ever write a sequel or are you totally over the characters and wanna bury them in a deep, deep hole? Oops sorry I have more questions...If you do write a sequel Will Draco finally tell Lucius to bugger off cos it pissed me off so much that Draco was sooooo touchy about others hurting Harry when he practically lets Lucius flay Harry with his words and let him get away with it limbs intact. Will we see Hermione and Ron anymore?? Will we see the twins get their partners? Harrys twins that is!! Id like to see the contrast in how the boys handle their mates!! Well thats about it so Ill give you my email so if some time in the future (cough)SOON(cough) you decide to give us a sequel you can message me if thats possible?!!!
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
P.S. Just to recape....AWESOME STORY. YOU ARE A TRUELY TALENTED AUTHOR
P.P.S If you continue with the storyline I'll give you...*looks around her room* aha this wallet! It has no money in it and the buckle is kinda dodgy but its all yours. Hmm Ok so I'm not that good at bribery but how about I give you eternal worshop and absolutly gush about the series to anyone and everyone who will listen? Will that be enough? Please let that be enough!
*grins stupidly*
Okay that is officially the most words I have ever put into anything let alone a review.
Nellie
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
P.S. Just to recape....AWESOME STORY. YOU ARE A TRUELY TALENTED AUTHOR
P.P.S If you continue with the storyline I'll give you...*looks around her room* aha this wallet! It has no money in it and the buckle is kinda dodgy but its all yours. Hmm Ok so I'm not that good at bribery but how about I give you eternal worshop and absolutly gush about the series to anyone and everyone who will listen? Will that be enough? Please let that be enough!
*grins stupidly*
Okay that is officially the most words I have ever put into anything let alone a review.
Nellie
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You do not how shocked I was when I happen to come across this story in your profile! I had thought that the sequel had never been delivered just to find out that I had over looked it! I read the whole story today and was in suspense, and was totally shocked and thrilled at the outcome. This story was the perfect way to end the series! I love how Maia got her wish, as well as a good mate. I'm also happy to know that Harry finally got rid of all the demons that were plaguing his being. And loved the twins! Azae especially the boy was too much like Snape, but oh so adorable! I'm so happy I had the chance to read the last story in the series and can honestly say I can't wait til you come out with another story, or maybe another branch of this story...maybe about Maia and Kellas? But I just had to let you know I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I've been reading this entire trilogy for the last three days. I love it. It's definitely one of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Bravo
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can finally say that after 3 very intense days of hours upon hours of reading and not wanting to sleep, but having to. I have finished all three stories. I would just like to take the moment and congratulate you on a job well done. There are no words to describe how wonderful of a job you have done with this story. I can honestly say that it is one of the very few, and when i say that i mean i can count them on my hand, that has brought such emotion out of me. I am glad you do not give way to telling people what is going to happen or possibly happen, or even a what do you want to happen next a b or c. As I sat here and read this story I was pulled with in its pages and almost unable to pull free. However, in those moments when I had to leave it...when I came back I was amazed how easily it was to slip right back into it has though I had never left it. I thank you for that. I hope that inspiration hits you again to do a Fourth, because I just cannot--do not want it to end there. You know? Its like a book or movie...once you get to the end you wish you never went through it so quick, because now you know what happened and there is nothing else left to do with it. Though I feel that there will not be one forth coming, because this one was done so well and left it on a good note. Plus, I do not know if you could top that. Perhaps you could and that is in the end your choice. So to wrap this up and stop me from rambling on and on. I just want to say thank you for sharing this and letting us experience this moment in time with them. I hope that you publish more so that I can check it out and be enthralled once again.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the whole story and all I can say is DAM.. you had me eating my nails .. drooling like an idieot and growling like a tiger.
Well written and have to say DAM good show.
Loved it all in all
DragZ
Well written and have to say DAM good show.
Loved it all in all
DragZ