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for What If?

by DawnOfTheDead

person MotekElm
schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great oneshot. Sexy, Funny, surprising

person Emily
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute, such a funny ending. I loved it.
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What if I told you that was abso-bloody-loutely brilliant writing? I laughed until my sides hurt. Fantastic!
person the norwegian girl
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i totally understand how this won that award, it really is funny, and quite sexy :)
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What if I said that I love the last two lines of this story?
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful i loved this piece and i think it is great any other sexy situations they get in to?
person ichiruki
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOLz, I knew something was up when the tie was yellow and not slytherin colored!
person Ellanath
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that was priceless!
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO.
Literally rolled around on the floor with that one.
You are a comic genius, and I love you to death.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What if i told you that i didn't think it was that funny. OK it was a bit, some of the repitition was annoying but as everyone has said it was a cute story. I thought it was gonna be another one of those really long Head Boy/Girl stories so this was refreshingly originally.
Although the bit that went , 'exciting excitement and romantic romance' was a bit annoying!!!