rate_review Reviews

I loved this!

Its was so cool!

I love this story very much, but whats with naming all the charpcter but two?

Wow. I've read this a few times (before it was finished) I really like what you've done with it. You've made me almost cry at a couple spots (I'm kinda really emotional at the moment), but laugh at quite a bit. I love what you did with De Bergerac or whatever his name was. That was hillarious!! ^^ You really did a fantastic job.

~Servant Indo, The Servantian Knight

awesome that's all i have to say. ^_^ K

I don't mean to sound critical, but I feel that this needs to be said in order to further you in your writing in the future. Although it can sometimes be interesting, I suggest not making Harry out to be some super magical being, related to every powerful wizard/witch in history. It's completely unrealistic, and turns off a great number of mature readers I find. Being related to one of the four founders would make more sense. Also having a large description scene where a great number of people are introduced bores people. Try to slowly introduce people a bit at a time, instead of in one large lump sum, it'll help hold interest better.

I will look for other stories tha you write. could you please e-mail to let me know when your new fic has been posted and where? this was a lovely story. I like the few dark touches especially the solution to the Pansy and deB. problem, inventive.

this was an awesome story!
I found from one of my reviewer's recommendations!
you have done an fantastic job!
I love it so much!
Kudos!

what ever happened to the potion master that was helping severus....alex i think was the name i can't remember correctly?

the last i saw of him he was wondering what was going on with his magic with both of the women he saw the black haired one and blond haired one.

please contact me at sheep_mcirvin@yahoo.com to tell me

oh by the way this was a great story

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Perfect, just the right amount of detail.

Yay! You put up an epilogue! *give you lots of kisses*

I'll be waiting for your next story!