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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
As far as suggestions? Well, I'd hate to suggest when you're doing such a great job on your own. Insted I'll tell you what I think. I love the turmoil poor Hermione's going through (I'm evil inside ;) as well as Draco's own troubled thoughts about what happened between that two. I love possessive Draco, so I loved your ending where Draco's quite ready to kick ass. I am hoping for a super heroic rescue as well as a super thankful Hermione who throws caution to the wind only to majorly regret it later...what can I say I live for drama, maybe it has something to do with my totally mundane life. :)
You don't need my suggestions, you're doing great and I can't wait to see what's next.
As far as suggestions? Well, I'd hate to suggest when you're doing such a great job on your own. Insted I'll tell you what I think. I love the turmoil poor Hermione's going through (I'm evil inside ;) as well as Draco's own troubled thoughts about what happened between that two. I love possessive Draco, so I loved your ending where Draco's quite ready to kick ass. I am hoping for a super heroic rescue as well as a super thankful Hermione who throws caution to the wind only to majorly regret it later...what can I say I live for drama, maybe it has something to do with my totally mundane life. :)
You don't need my suggestions, you're doing great and I can't wait to see what's next.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I loved this! I cannot wait until you update!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! *fans herself*
Okay can I just say I feel super special and slightly dirty *wink*
No one's ever dedicated anything smut to me ever!
This is good, really good. Have I mentioned how much I love your Draco, a total bastard that man. Love it! I also love how you alternate between Hermione's POV and Draco's, I love to know what that man is thinking! Can I safely assume that things between Hermione and Draco will only get hotter? And harder perhaps?
Can't wait to see what's next! Mwah!
Okay can I just say I feel super special and slightly dirty *wink*
No one's ever dedicated anything smut to me ever!
This is good, really good. Have I mentioned how much I love your Draco, a total bastard that man. Love it! I also love how you alternate between Hermione's POV and Draco's, I love to know what that man is thinking! Can I safely assume that things between Hermione and Draco will only get hotter? And harder perhaps?
Can't wait to see what's next! Mwah!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I find this story to be very interesting. What are Draco's real plans for Hermione? I bet I know just who's sex slave she will end up being. Can't wait to read more.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is turning out so good! I'm a total drama momma! Love this! I especially love that Draco's his bastard self! Can't wait to see more! :)
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It sounds interesting. It seems like Harry & Hermione are really happy. Is there going to be a bad break-up? I guess I'll have to wait and see.
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing start! I love, love D/H/H triangles! I cannot wait to see where you go next. :)