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for Cast No Shadow

by ColdWaterFairy

person luvhp
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo< what a great alt ending! loved it to pieces. No, I don't like cheating or hurting either, but Draco and Hermione deserve each other. I like the speech Hermione gave Harry, sounded pretty good.

NICE JOB!!
person ladiea
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Thank you so much for the Alternate ending. It's so sad but good all at once. It was a pleasure reading your wonderful story and hope you do continue creating more D/Hr love. ^.^

Take care!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the alt ending!
person Jammar
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was an amazing story and I'd like to thank you for giving it to us readers. I'm really not sure which ending I liked better. Both are such bitter sweet endings and both are wonderful. Please keep writting I would love to read more Harry Potter stories from you. Thank you.

Jammar
person JMFELTON
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe it's over, well done though!!!. I liked the alternative ending, both were really good but I'm a big Dramione fan. Thanks for mentioning me to thank me for reviews, it was my pleasure I thoroughly enjoyed this story, excellent 10/10. x x x Hope you write more luv Jess.x x x
person ladiea
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I am going to kill you. Not in your sleep though, that would be too kind for an angry reviewer. I'm going to force you into a wooden chair and chain you down until you rewrite the ending for us. How could you dangle draco/hermione in our face and then, so quickly, snatch it away? *tears*


P.s. (after drinking some much needed vodka) It was okay I guess....
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
make one where she just leaves his ass for draco.
person luvhp
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Wow, poor Hermione, having to work at strip club, only to come home to a 'tongue-lashing' from Draco. Mmmmm.
Well, I'm only on Ch. 5 and I have to go home, tend to the kids...mm, then hubby. Good story!! Can't wait to catch up tomorrow. I hope you are continuing this story, I hate finding great abandoned stories.
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely ending, though Herms did die, but lovely nontheless! :)
As to should you make Harry cry? I say, should the sun shine? ;)

Regardless, I loved your story and am sad to see it end (though the thought of an alternate ending makes me giddy) and shall look forward to your next work!

Mwah!
person ladiea
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you see it my way. *grins*

Remember that no matter what ending, Hermione dies so it'll make me so very sad no matter what. But I'm pleased that you are considering an alternate ending.