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Um okay i really didn't know how else to get a hold of you so, I have fixed my disclamer so... yeah

Great story! I loved the twisted torture and her fatal illness. It added darkness and depth to Hermione's character. You've written Draco perfectly. Your dark tale adds balance to all the lovey-dovey sweet fluff that is written out there. Every once in while, it's refreshing to read tribulations and darkness. I much preferred the original Harry ending rather than Draco's ending. The alternative ending didn't fit in with Hermione's characterization that she was going to marry Harry no matter what. Good show! Loved it. Thank you.

you really do write wonderfully :) i never expected to find such great writing on this domain ^^

LoL, I couldn't email you, so I'm using this to reply to you instead:P Just a heads up, but when I first posted 'ETLAN', I tried clicking the "Required Disclaimer Format", and the page wouldn't load. That's why my disclaimer looked the way it did, lol. I'm glad it amused you, btw;) I've changed it to this: "This is a work of fiction. Any resemblances to actual people: living, dead, or otherwise, is purely coincidental. All characters DO belong to me (unless otherwise noted), and I DO hope to one day make a profit. Until then, please enjoy." And deleted your message. (you're welcome to delete this one of course too:X) ~Dragyn

Thankyou for the alternative ending i much prefer her ending up with Draco. xx

The endings are both good except for the fact you are passing judgment on Hermione, letting her live with Harry or die with Draco. I find that strange because in both stories she is just following her heart, her true love is just different in both endings but both guys are hurt equally in the different endings so I just ind it strange to let her live with Harry or die with Draco. You are implying one was right and one was wrong, which I am not sure if that was your intention, but that is how it comes off. I feel however in stories of love and matters of the heart one should never pass judgment one a person choice to be with their true love.

THAT'S SUCH A SAD STORY. I LOVED IT. IT HAD MUCH DEPTH AND IT JUST MADE YOU WANT TO CRY AT THE END BUT AT THE SAME TIME IT MADE YOU WANT TO JUMP FOR JOY WHEN YOU KNEW THAT DRACO AND HELEN WILL FALL IN LOVE. ONE THING I WAS DISAPPOINTED WITH IS THAT DRACO AND HERMIONE DIDN'T SATY TOGETHER BUT I STALL LOVED THE WAY IT ENDED EVEN IF SHE DIED. I LOOOOVED IT. :)

is there any way you could write another ending where she doesnt get sick and die? I loved your story it was AMAZING but Hermione suddenly coming down with a terminal illness seems like a cop out, its just to convienient to end the story with her dying. Please write another ending

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

What an incredibly sad story -- both endings.