rate_review Reviews

Now that was HOT!
^_^

That's pretty good :) One of the few stories that actually have good spelling and mostly good grammar (there were one or two mistakes) but other then that you did a really good job :) They do seem a little out of character, but I like that you thought about the fact that she would wear sensible panties instead of a thong. That does seem very Hermione-ish. Overall, I liked it :)

Your writing is not bad but Ron and Hermione seem a bit out of character. They seem a bit too sure of themselves especially for that type of relationship.