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for Third Time's The Charm

by ozarkmoon

schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: WHEW!! I think my shorts melted. I loved reading about each little 'Malfoy technique' as he practiced it on Athena. He certainly was giving it his all, taking her beyond her comfort zone into more orgasms than she thought she had to give.

Lucius seemed right on his game, so what is it that Athena still deems to be missing? Does she want actual caring to accompany Lucius' lovemaking? Or has Lucius just not discovered that his partner has some sort of kinky predilection he could be furnishing? I can't imagine he wouldn't go for it if he knew she was interested in something a little less 'traditional'.

I guess I will be waiting to see what Lucius needs to deliver to be thought an acceptable lover. If he fails the third time, send him to me. I'm not picky. 8-)
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooer, missus, fabulous hotness! That certainly must have cleared out the cobwebs. I don't think she can seriously rate him 'average' again after that performance. Looking forward to more of your work xx.

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