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I have read this story twice and still roll-over laughing. Please continue to give us funny H/D and Remus/Sirius/Snape. Thanks.

ooooooh! i really loved this. made me laugh so much. and its so cute! i love fred and george! : ) are you continuing this? i hope you do! looking forward to it!!!!!!!!! ^.^

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That chapter 6 was a real somethin...
it made me laugh so hard i was practically writhing on the floor with laughter. *wipes tears*
great job!
i've read those mangas too. all of ur characters wer perfect : )
now i'm off to read next chapter...... *skips away*

I love this story!! Please update again soon.

I LOVE this story! It's very fun with a great plot. You have done very well. My only complaint are there are quite a few grammar mistakes that at some points makes reading a little difficult. These distracting point are few and far between, but there are a lot of mistakes. If you need a beta I would be more than willing to do it. Anyway, on with loving praise. I love this story because you've done a wonderful job developing the plot and creating some believable (and very HP-esque) situations. I love the whole Snape/Black/Lupin thing and all of the babies that are coming their way! You are a very creative writer and I cannot wait to read more! And feel free to let me know if you need a beta.

Wow, this is one of best, well written stories I have had the pleasure of reading...can't wait for the next chapter...although I think that maybe Madame Pomphrey's potion came a little too late.

Soooo need chapter 7!!!!

Soooo need chapter 6!

i just wanted to tell you how much i am enjoying this story. i try not to start reading WIP because, as is the case here, i end up getting hooked and really enjoying them and then become increasingly frustrated as they either take FOREVER to be finished or get left off just hanging there! :) hopefully that won't be the case this time... i'm really enjoying where you're heading and looking forward to more!

if constructive criticism is wanted i don't have any as far as writing style or direction of the piece, but i did want to tell you that in several chapters you have repeatedly written 'trust' where you are meaning to put 'tHrust' and 'hansome' where i think you meant 'hanDsome'. i can't remember if you have a beta or not and this type of tiny mistake is so easy to have even if you are getting things checked over. if you DO need a beta i'd be happy to volunteer... i'm at LoverofallthingsPttR@yahoo.com... if you already have one they are definitely up to par as those are the only tiny things that caught my attention... obviously it didn't detract from my ability to read your tale, but if you wanted to know there it is... and if you didn't want to know then forget this last paragraph and just remember that i greatly enjoyed the story so far! :)

LoverofallthingsPttR

It's about time that Snape realize that he's a handsome. The title is a little off, but the story is fine.