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for Divine Destiny

by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person NightLo
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...well, little Caiden, acts wise and protects your own daddy!

BTW, would Caiden other father appear soon?
person RRW
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like. Excellent story!!
person alma
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Tooo cute! Draco is goood with him! I sooo need chapter 3!!! Is it Friday yet? Where does Draco take him?
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want more
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and I can't wait till you update...which I hope is soon!!!!
person hazel
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so sweet. And I'll bet my bottom dollar that it will be hot as hell, when they finalley get down with it, if you know what I mean! ^^ Please update soon!
person ridert
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting start look forward to seeing more
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like the idea of your story...its cute and its funny... you have a ton of spelling and typing errors that make it hard to read. maybe re-read it and correct a few things? or perhaps a beta? the story is great though, and i can't wait until you update and i get to see where you are going with this one...