rate_review Reviews

Sorry I've never reviewed your stories before. I always follow your stories and enjoy them very much. I love how you update so often and every chapter is so smokin hot. Keep up the good work, I know you will.

Sorry - no offense...but as I loosely counted it - the word 'fuck' appeared more than 10 times in this single chapter - though I enjoyed very very much...just imagine...an invisible and transparent hand stretching your body, that meant....you could SEE inside! Wow...what a scene that could be...however, good that Valen was not around, or else...evil grin - v -

Such great potion can be used with a simple 'silentio', then everything could be settled easily - however, really no exposure to your opponents, including the MEDIA, as they surely didn't need any more news about their love life on the front page...and little Valen!

Wow...finally up! The final road to victory, peace and happiness - though the road would be hard, sad and bitter at the same time!

The nightmare was awful, and...to some extend...I am worried that would be a seer dream...but I just frigntened myself - that was not, and would not (hopefully)...as Valen is a child born of love and care between Draco and Harry, dark and evil magic cannot pollute him. Also, with the revelation that love can fuel magic, as hate does, then Harry can do it - just like his mother, Lily, Harry's love for Valen and Draco can protect them and vice versa.

Finally - we knew what does Draco see each time with Harry's magic and emotion - would Valen able to do it? If so - how can Harry teach Valen when your son can tell you are no longer angry everytime?

Fantastic start! Love the dream sequence. And Draco knowing Harry so well that he is able to bring out his best.

Sooo need chapter 2!