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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with you about refusing to believe that Harry and Ginny truly broke up. Not with the way they truly feel about one another. I would like to know how Ron is going to handle the scene though. Are you going to write another chapter?
Cosmyk
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Also, I don't really like Harry/Hermione either. They loved each other like sibs so it kinda disturbs me to read about them getting it on together. I will always be a die-hard Harry/Ginny fan.
Cosmyk
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really liked it and I'm glad that you made Hermione save herself for Ron, I usually like Snape and Hermione but in the book it was Ron and Hermione which I can accept. I really enjoyed reading this fic and hope that you will continue with it. Thanks for the great story and keep up the good work.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was okay to be honest. Let's see where to go from here. I would imagine the Ron would be initally shocked and wondering what the bloody heck was going on, but on the other hand naked hermione so... which do you think would grab his attention first. I know that Hermione likes Ron in this one but what are his feelings for her? Maybe you should start the next chapter with Ron's day up to the point he found them and see where it goes from there. Just a suggestion
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was by far the best Harry Potter pwp I have EVER read. I could barely finish the story, it was turning me on so much.
Please, please, PLEASE write more.
Please, please, PLEASE write more.
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was wickedly awesome
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written, although some parts seemed somewhat rushed.
Perhaps a bit of doubt on any parts would've made it more realistic.
But like I said, great story.. :)
Perhaps a bit of doubt on any parts would've made it more realistic.
But like I said, great story.. :)
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the way you used that line about 'hips flaring and look after orgasm' twice in the story. Fabulous. I'm not usually a fan of AFF works, just because of the slash galore on here as I'm a very heterosexual male, but this story wasn't slash and had a nice bit of descriptive detail. Excellent, keep up the good work, as long as it isn't slash.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well as a fellow writer its a shame you havent gotten more then one review, but as a harry hermione enthusiast i'd say tough luck... like you said you arent into that relationship apparetnly... if you keep writing i hope you make this a harry/ginny/hermione story. you can have your cake and eat it too... write harry and hermione as lovers but not in love... ginny can be in love with both of them and they can be in love with her... nice writing by the way.