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for A Tasteless Victory

by Grittie

person Dezra
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have me wanting to find out what's wrong and how they are going to fix it. You created a very interesting start to a story, well done.

acraftycutie@yahoo.com
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3! But isn't he still manipulating Harry? If Harry finds out why Draco wants to get close to him.... he won't be happy.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!
person Vittani
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was brilliant, really deep. I cant wait to see what they do.
person NightLo
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...someone noticed Harry was in pain, but...has Harry done anything 'bad'/'unacceptable' to himself?
person Mistaken
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot!!! I think its really worth continuing! Update soon!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! i think this is an absolutely awesome prologue so far! seems like you have it well thought out and know where-ish you're going! loving it so far! Please continue... and soon! :D
Stef
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will there be a chapter 2?
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's an excellent start. Very well written. I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter. :)
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it - please continue!!