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for The Issue of Mine Enemy

by NormanCharles

person Extraho
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so is harry going to pullhis head out of his arse and join her in the shower and explain?
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooo! way to go, Cruz!

i really enjoyed this chapter and i
was all set for the three of them to
get to know one another so much better.

i feel so bad for poor Belle and i do
hope that Harry and Marie will show her
that she is worthy of their love.

i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
don't keep us waiting too long. this
story is brilliant!

~blessings~
ldf
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter.

and gods, i loved Blazing Saddles! that
was a great line!

thanks again for a good read.

~blessings~
ldf
person Norbet
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story's going, keep it up!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see the update. i really do enjoy this
fic and i look forward to new chapters. i would
have reviewed after the last couple, but i was
too bloody lazy to sign in. so i'm doing so now.
forgive me. i know how much authors thrive on
reviews.

i do so love to see the direction this is headed
and i'll wait patiently (sort of) to see what you
have planned for Harry, Marie, Belle and Alexis.

its been a wonderful ride so far!

~blessings~
ldf
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, so many lovely updates this weekend.
someone's Muse or Muses have been kind to
them. wish i could say the same.

oh, i do hope Harry will be able to save
Bella and his little girl.

i'll be waiting on the edge of my seat!

~blessings~
ldf
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. so it took me quite some time to get
around to reading this. every time i checked
the section, here was this intriguing title and
an even more intriguing story line. so i finally
took the bait. i'm ever so glad i did.

this is such a wonderful story and a great plot
bunny. i must admit that i do love Bella's
character because she is that frigging mental. but
the way you've painted her here, two sides of a coin
and trying hard to be both, is simply amazing.

i enjoyed reading it and will be back with the next
installment, happy to read more. do keep up the good
work.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you make Alastor sound like Scotty.
person Tumshie
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic, an original take on the Harry/Bellatrix scene. Just one point the term is bollocks not bullocks
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, I love how in Chapter Two you went into such detail. Does my heart good to see someone so detail oriented! Awesome job, please update soon!!

--Dark Cabaret--