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for The Issue of Mine Enemy

by NormanCharles

schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
finally found the Blazings Saddles reference
hate to criticize your amazing story, but the line Lili says to Bart is, "Is it twue how they say you people are "gifted"? [the sound of Bart's pants being unzipped] Oh, it's twue! It's twue, it's twue!"
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rereading the story, and just caught the Star Trek joke in chapter 10!
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another person commented about a Blazing Saddles reference, but I can't seem to find it, and I'm at chapter 19
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that this is my all-time favorite story
person poohbear74
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this and I can say that with a smile on my face!
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is...wow.

That was most interesting. In a most good way. I'm rather glad to see that your story took on a life of it's own. I Feel this was much better than anything shorter would have been.

I do feel for Harry though, I would think it to get a bit rough for someone in a poly household and hearing thoughts...I don't think I would like not having my private thoughts.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing...
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just when I think you've reached your pinnacle, you keep aiming higher
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mother of Odin... you're amazing... historical references lost on the average person...
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the plot thickens