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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well..that was really awsome! you are such a great writer! hmm the answer to your question is to let draco live i think..but..add a twist that no one will expect at all..thats my advice..great job on the story..keep it up! :)
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, no death while saving anyone...I need happy ending fanfiction!!!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You must have a warped mind to come up with this...(that was intended as a complient!) I'm all for happy endings! ;-)
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I would love to see both of them get rescued before the baby is born, but if you decide to kill Draco off while saving her, that would definately put a twist to this story. I hope that hey aren't kept in the prison like building for a real long time before they can get help. Another thing, if Draco dies, who will step in to help Hermione with the baby?
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a very interesting concept, but you might consider getting a beta to help you with some of your spelling and punctuation. I know sometimes it's difficult to see our own mistakes when we write, or we get so execited by the idea of sharing our creativity with others that we just can't take that extra time to read over it a 2nd or 3rd time. I've done it myself in the past. There are a ton of people out there who would be more than willing to look over your work for you, and it shouldn't be hard to find one, especially in a fandom as popular as Harry Potter.
Having someone check your work and help you could turn this from an interesting concept into a great story.
Having someone check your work and help you could turn this from an interesting concept into a great story.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awe twins!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well how are they going to feel about all this now is starting to become a reality. i dont know who to feel the sorryist for. the reason i didnot say anything to you about the title is i am a lousey speller! well i am so EXCITED that you wrote another chapter!!! :) please update soon and let us know how they take the news!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, very original story line. I really like it, can't wait for your next chapter. Absolutely loving Draco right now. :)