rate_review Reviews

PLEASE FINISH THISS TORY PLEASE!!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey
I think our story is great. I don't care about the spelling mistake and the other people are being ass for that because everyone has prombles. I hope you keep writing.
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JINXS

hadnt i posted a review in here?

uhmm anyway

i really dont mind ur way of writing, i enjoy reading this story, so keep it up :)

Just a question; are you from Texas or something? It's just that you overly use 'y'all' instead of you all, or some other string of words. British people don't use 'y'all' in their vocabulary as far as I know. I just thought that you might want to work on that. However, everything else seems to be really great!
yours truly,
cope

Very interesting storyline. I've seen plenty of stories with spelling/grammer issues, it does distract the storyline a bit, but seriously, the people here are very nice(most) and are only trying to help, do not take it too personally. I do believe this story is quite Unique, so hopefully you will continue.

Please don't let Draco die! Also, don't let other people get you down. Most give tips and hints because they think they're helping you. However, the ones that are mean need to understand that it is in fact your story and if your portrayal of the characters doesn't please them, they should write their own. Keep writing. You do a very good job. :)

Hi!...Loved it...Loved it..Loved it...cant wait for more...oh and if you would like...i would be willing to beta for u...just let me know!

Okay...so here's the problem. When you're writing a fanfic based on such an international hit as Harry Potter and you then give the characters a Lousiana inspired dialect...it's a turn off to the readers. Hate to say it but there you have it. Now I'm all up for expressing oneself in fanfiction and believe me when I say that I love your plot and I love where you're going with this but...it's still a turn off none the less.

Oh and the whole thing you said about leaving the Yall's to spite...seems pretty petty and imature on your part. But hey...you Gryffindor's are pretty stuborn when you want to be so there's not much you'll probably do about it. :P