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by Ms_Figg

person DarkIris
schedule March 16, 2023 at 12:00 AM

First, a tribute and my sincerest thanks to Ruth S., AKA, Ms. Figg, for your prolific work for the Sevmione ship. You created your very own Severus and Hermione and a few other memorable characters. I appreciate your work more than ever since the insidious habit of Dumbledore bashing has pervaded the SS/HG fandom. It's insidious, inaccurate, and grossly unfair. Your portrayal of Dumbledore's personality, motivations, honor, and relationship with Severus is the one I feel most accurate and the one I treasure. I'm grateful your writing was amongst the first in this fandom that I read and I'm grateful it's available for others. 

This is regarding Snippet 22 ~ A Surprise in the Upper Corridors

This is my favorite of the snippets. This is a clever example of the naughty (bordering on perverted) pleasure "blackmail for sex" subset of the "hot for teacher" trope. The author not only pulled it off, she transformed it into a believable eventual HEA that doesn't strain the credulity of those who understand both the May/December trope and why it's a no brainer for this particular ship. Both are characters who had a better chance of deciding they were meant to always be single than finding true love. In her case because she refused to accept someone who didn't understand and want her authentic self and in his, because he didn't think it was possible and/or deserved. Also, I'm glad the author edited a few parts of the original version. The original parts weren't disturbing or anything negative, they were bits of Severus' dialogue that now flow better and are less unnecessarily dramatic. The whole one shot just flows so well.

schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOHH!Love it! Always great! She will have to get some more interesting bras and knickers just for the fun of it. Can we expect many more chapters with fun in them or is it coming to an end soon??
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Danie: I only write new snippets when I make new XXX animations for them on my burningpen.com website, because I write the stories to fit the animations. I haven't made any in a while so there haven't been new chappies.
person Flowerchild
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your snippets but I always imagined you could do a full story with number 24, If not wed then bed. Hermione being disappointed with her first time and confessing it to Ginny and Severus overhearing or something. I love all your stories, keep up the good work!
person An Intrigued Lurker
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I posted my review, and then read your others. I heard plenty of mention of "Chapter 13"... something about her being the perfect literary phantom of many a gushing critic. So, naturally, I was curious, and went to take a looksee.

I had read it before, I
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Lurker. Firstly, thank you so much for coming out of lurking mode. lol. Yes, I shared that video when I was a bit lit, but decided to leave it up to show pretty much I'm mostly about having fun concerning things, my life and my writing. Life's about finding joy and I do it the way I feel suits me. These stories reflect that and not much more. Now as to your desire concerning Hermione's personality . . . you know, I can see it. I really can and just love it. :) You can count on seeing that Hermione in the future. She will probably be out of Hogwarts, since she's going to need time to develop this persona. But it sounds like it could be a fun romp with a very frustrated and put-out, (but still smexy) Severus. Thanks again!
person Delfin
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh radness good one ;)
person An Amused Lurker
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What I miss by not reading every story, thank goodness you brought this to my attention by updating. I was just browsing the chapters of this story when I see: Miss Figg on Video. I assume you've created a music video or something, but no! A proclamation of your drunken state, and a link to an actual video of you singing! What a treat, to actually be able to see the person. I'm quite visual, and I'm a fan of yours.

All I know is that you
person Onitsu
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love these. You are quite the imaginative writer, And yes. I gave you a donation at theburningpen.com I'm just awaiting my email hehehehe
These are just GREAT! I was never a Snape fan til after I read book 7. But now, I know of the smexiness that is Severus!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?